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Parker McCoy's avatar

You really capture the loneliness in this whole scene. It's strange to be among nothing but strangers in a large crowd. Johann doesn't seem to mind. Obviously, he's used to it. His journey is putting him through it for sure. I know he's going to really enjoy companionship whenever he finds it again. Great atmosphere here, Colleen.

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Gee, thx, Parker. It's been fun to try to visualize how he would perceive the world first on the train following a hypothermic event in the river only days earlier....how the world would move around him and he isnt taking everything in.....and then on the steamer, a little more aware and now on the docks....starting to work and function again. Thanks for reading...

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