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Parker McCoy's avatar

The long journey to Minnesota should be an interesting one. Johann is moving ahead in location and in life. Great post, Colleen.

Colleen Bent's avatar

Thanks, Parker, for taking the time to read and comment. Made my day :)

Luna's avatar

This is written in such a way that it’s immediately captivating, riveting. I yearn to read more, but from the beginning. Thank you for sharing your story.

Celia (aka Afterforever) ✨🎵's avatar

This is beautifully written. The stillness, the repetition, and the gradual sense of motion are handled with such care.

Colleen Bent's avatar

You are so nice :)

Celia (aka Afterforever) ✨🎵's avatar

Thank you, that’s very kind of you 😊