Sounds like a brutal, hard life but as Georg says, Johann will get used to it. Your writing flows so well. It takes me no time to read it. Excellent, Colleen.
Colleen, you really feel the cramped steerage, the brief relief on deck, and the small ways people look after each other. That ending lingers in a quiet, unsettling way.
Sounds like a brutal, hard life but as Georg says, Johann will get used to it. Your writing flows so well. It takes me no time to read it. Excellent, Colleen.
Thanks for reading, Parker. It means a lot. :)
Colleen, you really feel the cramped steerage, the brief relief on deck, and the small ways people look after each other. That ending lingers in a quiet, unsettling way.
Thanks, Celia, for reading and taking the time to comment. :) It's can be challenging to try to 'feel' what one's character feels.