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Johann's progress is gradual but gradual progress is still progress. Nice pacing.
Hi, Parker. Thx for reading, I appreciate it. Are you thinking it is too gradual, the pacing I mean? For the longest time (in earlier chapters) I was worried I was going too fast lol.
No, I think it works, for sure. He’s on a lonesome journey and it shouldn’t go too quickly. I think it’s just right.
Johann's progress is gradual but gradual progress is still progress. Nice pacing.
Hi, Parker. Thx for reading, I appreciate it. Are you thinking it is too gradual, the pacing I mean? For the longest time (in earlier chapters) I was worried I was going too fast lol.
No, I think it works, for sure. He’s on a lonesome journey and it shouldn’t go too quickly. I think it’s just right.